Went for a walk..and it inspired

when i look at the moon bright in the brisk night sky,
i cannot help but wonder why,
or what it is, im passing by,
as the cold night air brushes my warm cheek,
the warm fireplace at home is all i seek,
or the feeling of lonliness, oh so bleak,
as my shoes hit against the pavement while i walk,
all i can think about is the life ive always sought,
and thinking to myself,or i mean thought,
ive pretty much got everything i ever might want,
i look at you and know its something that can never be bought,
so when i finally stopped to tie my shoe,
i thought,
ill write a poem just to say i love you šŸ™‚
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~ by trackstar3328 on December 10, 2009.

2 Responses to “Went for a walk..and it inspired”

  1. hmm, a poem about seeing the moon and tying your shoe? cool and unique! šŸ˜‰

    maybe you can try reading this story, i think this’s related in some ways with your work: http://hubpages.com/hub/A-Story-I-Wrote-for-Her

    keep writing šŸ˜‰

  2. thanks! yeah i wrote this last year at around 2AM when i took a walk out onto my college campus. gald you like it, i will post others as time goes on.

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